Jeremiah Story- Improved Version - 2 Feb

Dear Roddy,
I'm getting there! This iteration nears the 3-minute mark + I deliver it more smoothly & with more expression.

I think my "pay-offs" are:
• God speaking to you? = anticipatory set
• In the Sultanate of Oman
• Getting a research contract to lead an Arab team
• Dr. Shawki's heart attack
• Fetal Position & Voice of God
• Opening Bible to Jeremiah / message
• Never alone. He knows who & where we are...

I would stilll ike to smile more & have more of my personality shine through. What recommendations do you have to improve this version of my story?

Thanks for your continued support and encouragement!
As we seek the extraordinary....
Dorothy

Dorothy Guy Bonvillain