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Dorothy 7 Feb
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bonvillainf
6 Views • Feb 08, 2013
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Hi Roddy,
Please critique. I'm delivering my story more smootly, and now have it under 4 minutes. Please advise what else you think I can take out & still maintain the integrity of the story.
Genuine thanks for your guidance.....blessings, Dorothy
Please critique. I'm delivering my story more smootly, and now have it under 4 minutes. Please advise what else you think I can take out & still maintain the integrity of the story.
Genuine thanks for your guidance.....blessings, Dorothy
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