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The heat is keeping me awake this evening, so I seem to be obsessing over this film quality. Oh, if only this little movie could be as clear on the internet as it is on my computer. le sigh....
Say, my new cohort of film-creators, would you guys be so kind as to post little bits of critique for this project? I am more of a sculptor by nature, you know, and have little experience with the motion picture art production, so your offers of advice would be a delight for me and would benefit my future projects. Thank you in advance, Christy