Creep Vocal Cover, second attempt

Yes, I tried again. This is one of my favorite songs because it hit a little too close to home for my comfort.
PLEASE, give me some feedback or advice. I really do want to get better. One of my friends told me I was a bit shaky with longer notes, so I'm trying to cut down on the false vibrato. It's a BAAAAAD habit, so it'll take time to cut it entirely, but I'm trying. Seriously though, any feedback is good feedback. Since dailymotion doesn't really have a comments section, try my email. [email protected] Just label the subject as "singing advice' or something similar. as ling as it is easy to figure out what it is.