Close Enough _Trailer- A MLP TOY SERIES (PLEASE READ DESCRIPTION BELOW)

Hello, everybody!!
As I told you guys in my last video, I got an idea for a MLP TOY SERIES. And yay! Here’s the trailer. Sorry its not so cinematic but I tried my best. Anyway, I know this is kind of confusing so I’ll explain the concept of the series.
Diamond Mint is a pony who always doubts her luck. She thinks its always affecting her success. And it always makes her only be close enough to reach her goals. But never lets her achieve her fullest goal. Sunset Shimmer is one of her closest friends and is a childhood friend and as well as neighbor.She tries to help Diamond Mint overcome her insecurities and teach her to be happy. Diamond Mint really over exaggerates sometimes and can be a drama Queen.
So, I got this idea because sometimes this happens to me. When I try my best and then my luck gives up on me.
I’m not so sure to film this series. If you guys like this trailer then, I can try to make it.PLEASE COMMENT DOWN BELOW AND LET ME KNOW.

And I’m new to filming and recording so please don’t mind my newbie-ness. And please comment down below if I have done some mistakes or also the flaws of the video. And if you guys have some requests then I will be more than happy to fulfill them. English isn't my first language , don't mind .SO (Appropriate) COMMENTS, LIKES or DISLIKES AND REQUESTS ARE HIGHLY APPRECIATED.
LASTLY, If you ever feel lonely you can DM with me in Instagram of Hangouts . @Snowyskycharm
BYE, HAVE A GOOD DAY!!!

Music Attribution:
Hidden Agenda by Kevin MacLeod is licensed under a Creative Commons Attribution license (https://creativecommons.org/licenses/by/4.0/)
Source: http://incompetech.com/music/royalty-free/index.html?isrc=USUAN1200102
Artist: http://incompetech.com/
Sneaky Snooper by Audionautix is licensed under a Creative Commons Attribution license (https://creativecommons.org/licenses/by/4.0/)
Artist: http://audionautix.com/