wardha jawdat - reaction!

moments
when words seem
ineffective,
insipid,
impotent......

all that you
really want to do is:
fling your Hurt
arms flailing,
legs kicking
at its
cause.

editted after some very constructive and insightful critique from an esteemed peer....in the hope that it 'flows' better now...

wardha jawdat

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