The Mysterious Mare Do Well experimental edit

I am among a great deal of bronies who denounce "The Mysterious Mare-Do-Well" as the most morally corrupt episode of "My Little Pony: Friendship Is Magic". So I've taken the liberty of editing it to try to make it look less controversial to a small degree and more watchable. As stated in the title, this is an experimental edit, so I await your opinions on how it turned out.

My Little Pony: Friendship Is Magic (C) Hasbro and Lauren Faust