The Awful Doctor Duncan

This is my first attempt at bringing this story to the net as a web serial. It's a pilot, full of unexplained circumstances and meant to be ... all » a tad jarring. Still not happy with it, though.

What you see here is rougher than a rough cut. The editing was rushed to meet a deadline, alot of things were left unfilmed, they WILL be filmed and things will be reshaped.

Any/all feedback is welcomed so long as it is constructive.

Here's the pitch: A slightly-off doctor retreats to suburbia to hide in his ex-girlfriend's basement, while both of them harbor equally morbid skeletons in their respective closets. Quite literally.