Rommel Mark Dominguez Marchan - * A CRITICS CHISEL AND HAMMER

to all Poemhunter's critics circle

More welcome notes
to the thrilling replies
As you criticized my
poems true and defined
Relate more my sorrows and pain
as well as breath
my joy happiness wing

Creative response I read
artists morale up lift
inspires circle critics

Let your impartial pen
undyingly share
word rhymes
besets streams like
prose in metamorphical pin

Like you striking critics
chasing crystallized air
reclining in marbled corner
I am your chisel
You are my hammer

Rommel Mark Dominguez Marchan

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