jeff greyicewolf - feathers in the wind

ITS A COLD HARD BREEZE A FEATHERS FALL FROM THE SKY
its a beautiful feather from where no one knows
its taddered and worn from floating in the breeze
its seaching for what only the great spirit knows
it lands here and thier
then with wind it lifts agian.
to float in the breeze
then one day
as it floats along it meets with another feather
and together they are bound
togther floating
bounded by something they dont undersand
loced in a dance a dance of live and love
sharing the breeze of live together
forever togther in
love
well this is not one of my better onse but its early and im still not feeling to good
so let me know what u think..post a comment on my comments
good or bad ill take them all
greywolf

jeff greyicewolf

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